milk11 ([info]milk11) wrote,
@ 2008-12-02 18:21:00
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I Can See Your Breath Beneath Me When You're Gone
If you can recall that far back, you might remember that I started reading Spider-Man Loves Mary Jane over a year ago and started to really get into it. At the time, I ordered up to volume 13 and then learned that writer Sean McKeever had signed on exclusively with DC and would be leaving the series. Luckily, Marvel paid him for the scripts through vol. 20, which ran through last year and ended in a pseudo wrap-up. I wanted to keep up with the series, but trips to Dragon's Keep were too infrequent and they never seemed to have a copy of the latest issue when I was there anyway, so I sort of forgot about it. Several weeks ago I came across the collection and re-read them, and finally ordered the rest of the McKeever series online. They took their sweet time arriving but I've finally finished the series now (ps. Thank you, Mr. Postman, for folding the package and cramming it into our mailbox).



Overall I really enjoyed the last stretch of the comic, but I can't say it ended as nicely as it began. But boy, did it begin nicely. Throughout the whole thing there are moments of the series that are roll-you-eyes dramatic, and times when plot points are roll-your-eyes convenient, but overall the series lays out a well written storyline, and has managed to do my favorite element justice: characterization. Taking alternate shells of old and new faces, SMLMJ has managed to turn most of them into dynamic and well written characters. Spider-Man has definitely been explored through the teen-angst lens before, but it's definitely an interesting perspective to see his story exclusively through someone else's eyes, and with a shojo twist no less. The story focuses on the stuff of life: relationships, studying, dealing with parents and schoolmates. However, the superhero side of things doesn't play as minor a role as you might expect, and Spiderman might be featured in the comic more times than Peter Parker is. There's actually a scene where Spider-Man is hanging out with another female superhero who apparently has a thing for him. She tries to tell him her secret identity and he gets all flustered and tells her he's not comfortable with their relationship moving so fast. It's so dorkily adorable.

Speaking of adorable, Peter Parker as drawn by Takeshi Miyazawa is the cutest little nerdboy ever.

Cutest. Nerdboy. Ever.

But sadly, Takeshi Miyazawa left the comic at vol. 15 to further pursue his career. The art was left to David Hahn, and the switch in styles is directly responsibly for making last 5 volumes a bit more difficult for me to enjoy. Miyazawa's art was full of a lot of curved lines, clean perspectives, and really gave character to the talking bubbles. Hahn's art was just very... different. I personally found it to not be as expressive and clean as Miyazawa's, and having grown rather attached to the original style it was rather jarring to see characters say the same style of lines but be "acting" so differently. Emotion and expression all came out differently for the characters than it previously had. I stand by the notion that good writing trumps good art, but in the comic format the two interact in a really important way, so understandably the last few volumes felt a little flat to me. In another situation I might have liked the art just fine, but the drastic shift and was pretty distracting. I found myself reading the speech bubbles and then imagining what the panel might have looked like in the old art form to try to get back into the story. (Though in defense of the artist, I gave myself no time to get used to the style like I would have if I'd been keeping up with collecting the series, thus compacting the effect.)

The story itself, by the way, wraps up pretty nicely. Sorta. A combination of this being a teen drama and of being part of a much larger and more established story, the main characters can't possibly end up up together at this point. Which I mostly accept, except that gosh dang it can't Peter Parker and MJ just kiss or something already? But I guess you gotta leave something for the next guy to do, right?

In this case, the "next guys" are writer Terry Moore and artist Craig Rousseau. Unwilling to let their unexpected little hit die, Marvel wrapped up "season one" of the series and announced it would continue after a break. Vol. 1 of the new SMLMJ series was released earlier this year in August. Reviews are mostly positive but a bit mixed, as a lot of other people seem to have preferred the McKeever/Miyazawa team as well. I have considered stopping my collection at this point, since the McKeever ending was pretty much as conclusive as I was expecting, but I'm a bit intrigued by where the new ones might take it. I'd love some sort of personal recommendation for the new issues, but as no one I personally know reads them, we'll just stick with "may pick up out of curiosity," or "may use to fill out my Christmas wish list."
 
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SMLMJ
(Anonymous)
2008-12-03 07:40 am UTC (link)
Sorry you weren't crazy about my art, but I am doubly sorry it detracted from McKeever's great writing. Miyazawa is a hard act to follow, but all I could do was try and carry on McKeever's stories and without stifling my own art style in trying to appease the hardcore fans of Miyazawa. If the the characters I drew seemed too much like real teens in their emotions and expressions, then I think I did my job. Anyway, I hope you are still buying the title and like the great work Terry Moore and Craig Rousseau are doing.

Best,
David Hahn

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(Anonymous)
2008-12-04 01:07 am UTC (link)
What happened to my post?

David Hahn

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[info]milk11
2008-12-04 02:07 am UTC (link)
I received it (I originally screened it while trying to decide if you were the real David Hahn or not).

I have to say I'm a little embarrassed, as I never expected any of the SMLMJ creators to see my little amateur review. It's a rare opportunity to get direct feedback from a creator, so I appreciate you taking the time to respond.

To clarify my comments a bit more, your art definitely creates a different feel for the comic, and while I personally preferred the original feel (change is hard), that's not to say I hated your art either. I do apologize since my original comments were influenced by a bit of dramatic hyperbole. Some of the bits you drew came out really well, like the Spider-Man/Firestar subplot I mentioned. Fun details like Peter Parker's jacket tag sticking up really added to the visual characterization as well.

I had certainly grown attached Miyazawa's art and was sad to see it go. While I still overall prefer the visual style he created around the series, that's just my opinion, and in the research I did for this review I certainly noticed a lot of varied ones about SMLMJ. But overall I don't think it's necessary for you to answer to me or any other reader - you and the creators obviously worked hard at the comic and it shows. I really did enjoy the end of the series, but the unexpected art switch (compacted by reading the last seven volumes all at once) was jarring my first time through. I've gone through the final volumes again and still very much enjoyed the overarching story, and I hope to pick up the next few volumes and continue to enjoy SMLMJ.

Thanks again for your comment,
Kimberly

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(Anonymous)
2008-12-04 05:43 am UTC (link)
Hi Kimberly-
Aw, don't be embarrassed about your posts, it's your venue and I am glad you are talking about comics. And yes, professionals, (hell, the whole world), read the internet, scouring for reviews and opinions. You readers are the bottom line and it matters what you think, so we look. But all in all, I am glad you liked Peter's tag always poking up from his shirt. That one single little on-going gag was my favorite character bit during my 5 issue run.

Best,
David Hahn

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